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Haikus
Feb 24, 2013 12:10:06 GMT -5
Post by Admin on Feb 24, 2013 12:10:06 GMT -5
Cats smell very bad. Sometimes they reek of poopy. I should buy a boat.
I beat up a troll. It stole my elephant hat. I do not like trolls.
Blind people can't see. How do they imagine things? I am not so blind.
Haikus are not fun. I would rather beat up trolls. Or pretend blindly.
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Haikus
Feb 24, 2013 14:24:57 GMT -5
Post by Hayley Elizabeth on Feb 24, 2013 14:24:57 GMT -5
These aren't very good. You should try harder next time. Sorry, that was mean!
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Haikus
Feb 26, 2013 11:10:25 GMT -5
Post by Admin on Feb 26, 2013 11:10:25 GMT -5
I don't write haikus. So I agree, they do suck. You are not sorry.
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Haikus
Feb 27, 2013 19:02:17 GMT -5
Post by Celia on Feb 27, 2013 19:02:17 GMT -5
These aren't very good. You should try harder next time. Sorry, that was mean! my god, six syllables in the first line! the hypocrisy, miss Elizabeth!
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Haikus
Feb 27, 2013 22:02:33 GMT -5
Post by Hayley Elizabeth on Feb 27, 2013 22:02:33 GMT -5
These (1) aren't (2) very (3, 4) good (5) I count five!
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Haikus
Feb 28, 2013 1:37:09 GMT -5
Post by Celia on Feb 28, 2013 1:37:09 GMT -5
aren't contains two your syllable count is weak get it together
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Haikus
Mar 4, 2013 21:55:10 GMT -5
Post by Cetasaurus on Mar 4, 2013 21:55:10 GMT -5
Isn't the point of poetic elision to reduce the syllable count so it fits the meter? (or I guess, fits the pattern, in this case). I would count "aren't" as one syllable personally. o.o
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Haikus
Mar 5, 2013 22:37:28 GMT -5
Post by Celia on Mar 5, 2013 22:37:28 GMT -5
alright, that's a good point
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Haikus
Mar 8, 2013 15:13:49 GMT -5
Post by Hayley Elizabeth on Mar 8, 2013 15:13:49 GMT -5
OWNED CELIA
DON'T HAVE ANYTHING TO SAY NOW, DO YOU?
I DIDN'T THINK SO
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Haikus
Mar 9, 2013 13:46:10 GMT -5
Post by Celia on Mar 9, 2013 13:46:10 GMT -5
OWNED CELIA DON'T HAVE ANYTHING TO SAY NOW, DO YOU? I DIDN'T THINK SO i conceded because, despite my temptation to be stubborn and put up an argument, I acknowledge the legitimacy of cutting syllables from poems to enhance or alter the value of the work. i have to admit, i'm a little disappointed in you hailey. I thought you above childish showboating and caps-talking.
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Haikus
Mar 10, 2013 12:13:40 GMT -5
Post by Cetasaurus on Mar 10, 2013 12:13:40 GMT -5
i have to admit, i'm a little disappointed in you hailey. I thought you above childish showboating and caps-talking. Aw you're just jealous of her haha. 8)
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Haikus
Mar 11, 2013 23:10:27 GMT -5
Post by Hayley Elizabeth on Mar 11, 2013 23:10:27 GMT -5
lol, sorry Celia! I had to
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Haikus
Mar 12, 2013 11:28:08 GMT -5
Post by Admin on Mar 12, 2013 11:28:08 GMT -5
OWNED CELIA DON'T HAVE ANYTHING TO SAY NOW, DO YOU? I DIDN'T THINK SO I am quite confused. Is this a haiku, or not? I do not think so.
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Haikus
Mar 24, 2013 23:58:14 GMT -5
Post by Hayley Elizabeth on Mar 24, 2013 23:58:14 GMT -5
It wasn't!
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