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Haiku
Nov 12, 2012 13:27:35 GMT -5
Post by Celia on Nov 12, 2012 13:27:35 GMT -5
Alabaster motes
Harbingers of wrathful frosts
Hang still in the air
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Haiku
Nov 15, 2012 20:01:12 GMT -5
Post by Cetasaurus on Nov 15, 2012 20:01:12 GMT -5
It's like the first line starts with solid imagery, but then that kind of gets lost in the next line because of "harbinger" and "wrathful" and then it kind of comes back in the last line but not as strongly. o.o
At least in my opinion. I don't really know what I'm talking about, just telling what I felt when reading. o.o
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