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Post by daryl1730 on Sept 16, 2010 14:30:39 GMT -5
[unrelated title], Chapter 1.
As he picked up the slice, his fingers started to burn. He dropped it almost immediately by reflex, but carefully started to lift it again. Bringing it to his face, he took a couple bites, filling his mouth. It, too, started to burn, but it was well worth it. As he began to chew, he could taste the mixture of sauce and cheese breaking through its doughy barrier, meeting and mixing on his tongue.
Chew chew chew
With every new bite rewarded with a hot splash of sauce, he fought his way through the burns. The hot swarm of deliciousness had started to mix to form a sort of homogeneous paste, and as he chewed more, he was thrown into a state of almost orgasmic pleasure. The taste, the texture, it was all so perfect! The glob of paste was getting smaller and smaller though, and he knew what he had to do.
Reluctantly, he tilted his head back. Moving his tongue back toward his throat, he forced what was left down his esophagus. He could still feel it as a hot, satisfying sensation slowly moving down his body. As it settled he began feeling a certain burning sensation in his abdomen, easily cured with a quick swish of water.
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Post by Admin on Sept 18, 2010 15:37:42 GMT -5
This is a beautiful story.
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Post by Golden Emblem on Sept 20, 2010 17:30:58 GMT -5
The writing was actually well done. Weird topic, though.
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Post by killerinstinct on Sept 20, 2010 17:53:40 GMT -5
Hahaha, that's just so you, Daryl.
That said, it makes me want to have a slice of pizza...
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